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Short Story : Detourby *kuro-mai

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/!\ Big file again /!\

I wish we could upload multiple files in 1 submission like in pixiv >.<

Sooooo... hum what to say. It's more a style exercice than a real short story actually. I wanted to practice what I rarely/can't draw so I had the idea to make a short comic.
Also I always have hard time to express myself with words, so I just wanted to see if I could explain myself better without any word. (is it working?)

I don't mind critics ^^ (especially negative, it helps a lot)

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Happy Halloween
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★ time : 5 days
★ tools traditional : Deleter paper A4, Indian ink, Maru pen, Gpen (rip), black copic (rip), white ink, lot of coffee..
★ tools digital : Deleter comicworks (tones) (crashed ab 50 srsly...) Photoshop (text).

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btw it's based on a ghost story (supposed to really have happened) i've read when i was a child in a random book.
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EDIT : thank you VERY much for the feedback, it REALLY help me a lot! I know i have to work more on the proportions and perspectives, but it's a pain to not see my mistakes when i draw it ^^"

For the story, I can't find it online, only in french.. basically, From this story, the driver was called "dr mike barnes" who was driving in Arizona desert to go to Tahoe Lake, found a little boy with a cap on the road, the boy leaded him to a cliff where a school bus was here (accident). he called the rescue and gives first aid to the kids. only one boy has passed : the little boy with the cap.

Also I know i forgot the "h" to the word "school" (hey seriously, the ONLY word i've wrote i made a mistake *shot me!* I wanted to correct it when i scanned everything, but I totally forgot ORZ!

thank you again, really !!